The Epic of Peter Cranbjerg

Det visuelle skal arbejdes med en del. Det er nok det største problem for mig. Teksten overlapper og man kan ikke rigtigt læse det. Ud over det forsvinder den kolde mand når man snakker til ham lol

Very well made game! I love the attention to detail, and the great art-style!

There are some problems though.

1. The background on the fishing scene is just a blank slate, with colors in the bottom right.

2. (I know this would be a pain to make) But on the first time you go out fishing, you should add a "1 fish limit", because no matter what you do, he always says "Good job yesterday, but 1 fish won't do much for us", even though i caught three.

3. On the 3rd day, i spoke to the shivering man at the bottom of the screen, he disappeared after his dialogue was done.

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Some positive notes for you, too!

1. I really enjoy the fact, you add variation to the fishing minigame, with at least 3 or 4 different routes being given to you.

2. You added an ending to your game, and it doesn't make you confused at all, and it fits very, very nicely in that part of the game.

3. Overall good job, it was quite dialogue heavy, but that is to be expected in these kinds of games.

Great job, and I hope to see more in the future!

(Comment was made by William)

1. there is a visual bug on the first scene to the right bottom of the screne.
2. The second npc you meet turns invisible. (all scenes)
3. text is  overlapping
Beside that great game like the story and the mini games was fun

I love the game is based around this "minigame", but maybe some instruction on how to do it. Other than that i only have a bit about the background, maybe make it a bit like an harbor or something similar, to give the players a feeling that they are actually fishing somewhere

Nice minigame and story, but there could be added a bit more background

The minigame is repetitive, but still more engaging than a simple dialogue box that goes on for too long.

nice fishing game. The characters are a little hard to see on the background, and it seems there are some backgrounds missing. Still nice game though!

Slavearbejde.
Men okay minigame :D

Farverne på scener og karakterer må gerne blive højere kvalitet så man kan se hvad der sker. Ellers et meget godt puzzle/minigame

Funny fishing game, but gets a bit repetetive since you have to do it more times

- Manden i starten blender lidt med baggrunden, evt outline?

- Hvordan skal man fange fisken, kunne godt bruge flere instrukser:)

a few visual bugs (that gb studio just kind of has), but aside from that a good game

Hans Mattson disappears when you talk to him from any side other than the front. Apart from that, it's a lovely and challenging fishing minigame.